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Fading into sounds around me
Flesh tingles at every contact;
Flashing lights in pretty colours
Blurs of figures, blurs of fingers
Gripping into the handle

Forty-nine minus fourteen?
Empty bottles on the floor
With child-safe caps.

Why did no one make
Suicide-safe caps?
They're too concerned
With their family dream:

Gotta save the children
Gotta hate the broken
Gotta save the children
Gotta hate the sad
Gotta save the children
Gotta hate the lonely
Gotta save the children
Gotta hate me;

How ironic:
To commit suicide with antidepressants.
©2006-2009 ~Naeryn
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Bah. >.>

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:iconlunerdragon:
wow! this really awesome!!

woo keep it up =D

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- As we sow, so shall we reap, and the fruits of our actions are like their seed. -
:iconnaeryn:
Thanks. I'm glad it's appreciated.

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:blackrose: :heart: :blackrose:

Let me be empty
Oh, and weightless, and maybe
I'll find some peace tonight
:iconsatah:
"Suicide-proof"... Aha.

I have a feeling, if one were to take this poem and squeeze it, irony would drip all over the floor. It made me do that strange little chuckle that's like "I probably shouldn't be laughing, but I cannot help it."

I realllly like this one. P:

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!
:iconnaeryn:
Kind of what I was going for. Kind of the way I felt.

Got to love how no one quite realizes how literal my poems are until I tell them >.>

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:blackrose: :heart: :blackrose:

Let me be empty
Oh, and weightless, and maybe
I'll find some peace tonight
:iconsatah:
I can kind of feel how literal they are. They're so powerful that my mind says that they have to be, I guess. n_n;

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Wowza! How awesomesupremo! That\'s just so ulticooliolicious!

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